This is my first attempt @ writing fiction.i have taken few liberties i hope u ppl wont take in a bad taste.
"oh my god if my pimples keep growing at this pace there wont be a inch of free space left on my face"screamed shana before applying those foul smelling ingredients on her face.
@ 18 life is like a roller coaster ride for shana d intelligent sassy, suave,uber cool chic (ok,ok its just her perception)she is a dreamer who dreams something and believe that to be true.really clumsy gal who cant even tie her shoe laces , who keeps writing entire three hours and still just manage to pass ,cant cook nor has any inclination too and keep getting thrashed for that too
hers is a lovely family of 6 people
dad mr madhavan-who is some typical mid aged investment banker wid paunched belly ,disappearing hairs and rising bills,
mum-ramya madhavan-typical middle class women who shouts at top of her voice @ just d of hint of dirt,loves to take control of d house.she is adolf hitler reincarnated but offcourse sans those moustaches.
sister gucci(no her mother wasnt carrying gucci bag when she was born)pre teen who actually know much more than her elder(older)sis about studies,life ,friends,trends,hangouts,sports, xxx ....
oh! wat to do wid these gen Y's they are smarter any day...
cousin rahil aka vada pav(coz his head resembled vada paav)dumbheaded genius who wuld fire vague questions just on anything
dadi-cutest of all,rami champion whum shana would terrify by saying she wanted to be a ramp model.
dog chipo whu had the habit of shitting at all wrong places.grin on his place would double seeing shana furious on seeing her favourite dress covered with shit.
as if this wasnt enough to give shana jitters there was her girly gang too to add to her woes.
shanaya ,though their names were similar but there wasnt anything in common in them.dont know wat got shana and shanaya together.
everything about shanaya was fake including her bf's,sexescapades even her boobs(hillarious!but true).
lavina-punjju gal possesing those typical superiority complex that is typical of army kids.the supposed ''good friend" of shana .treated other "normies"in college as if they came from a slum.shana just hated her for all the attention she received from guys.
ananya-a despo(desperate )gal who would mouth abuses more freely than her lessons at college.who just could lay her hands off her found love,wouldnt think twice about smooching in a full public view.
reshama-the dumbheaded bimbo.easiest prey for guys.otherwise conservative gal who would happily wear those cleavage showing cholis for navratri.
so overall it was happy all girly gang.every body loved bitching about eachother but were supposed "good friends"....
from the author......
From the author
Ideally this should be in beginning but since there is nothing ideal about this story so who cares where this preface comes……
Anatomy of entangled teen is mainly a fictional piece about an 18 year lass Shana who is tired of being looser that she is…..
It’s her journey from being looser to “kool babes”(ok!ok!i am exaggerating it) and realizing in blindly aping her cool peers she has lost complete track of who she is.she makes some blunders ,humiliates parents, gets poor grades, “cheats herself”.
but among all this chaos she discovers her “ true self”..many instances and dialogues are lifted from my real life.but I maintain this is largely a work of fiction.this is an attempt to bitch about people i know and have hated and is completely a piece of shit .you would agree with me if u have read part 1 and 2…..i thank you for wasting your precious time in reading this bull shit .1ce again I would like to mention this is work of fiction and any resemblance to any one living or dead is purely intentional
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